LO4: Subediting

 

I do not need to make improvements for my pull paragraph

For my interview I don't need to add speech marks. This is something I will take out in my final body copy and replace with italics to make it clear where the answers to the questions are.

I need to remember to capitalise the name of the company whenever it is mentioned in the interview 

I will remove the unnecessary 'And' at the beginning of my final question.

The strengths of my article are the engaging headline title and leading quote to pull the reader into the interview, as well as the small final paragraph that rounds off the interview perfectly and leads audiences to the chambers website. 

Another strength is how i used a teacher to pupil model to effectively target my audience and ask the questions they would like to know the answer to.